Peer Review Question that was most helpful to me

Is there too much abstraction? Too much "telling" the audience a moral or lesson? Or so much abstraction that its not clear what the song actually says? Point out where you would like more concrete examples from the song and less explanation.

This question helped me realize that I was telling more of a moral lesson rather than writing about what the song really means. When my paper was proofread I learned that I needed more concrete examples too. I did not have enough examples for my song. This is why this question helped me a lot.